Thursday, September 23, 2010
Core 1 Reflection
I am starting to really like the essay I have written for Composition 1. I believe my strengths are my natural voice and how descriptive some of my sentences are. Some of my weaknesses are the length of the paper and how generalized some of my paragraphs may come across. I'm really enjoying writing this essay and learning how to better my writing through a lot of revising and rewriting.
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The essay seems very natural and I could relate to a lot of the information. I liked how specific it was and you didn't just say ooooh yeah this happened and that was it. You went into detail about the rules that your teachers implemented while writing. The only concern is there were some choppy parts where the writing seems out of place or could use more emphasis. That can be changed just by reading it aloud to yourself so that it all flows, but for the most part it all flowed together. Just the little parts. I could tell it was a literacy narrative because it seems like you have found you writing voice now after this taking this class for 5 or 6 weeks now. Overall, I liked the essay and I'm sure after revising and adding more to it so it's not 2 pages it will be good. I don't know what your going to add or where so it all depends on that.
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